Brief 2: OUGD603 Brief - Package a new range of organic Jams - NEW IDEA Back of Jams + RE PRINT

So after the crit i changed the idea i had for the back of the jams and changed the spelling mistake on the front of the bottle. Also readjusting the back so it wasn't upside down. 

Keeping with the same layout i added information for different recipes, the ingredients list i changed the type so it was smaller, so it could fit in that one sections but keeping it consistent with the other text so not going below point 8 size. I also added the name of what the recipe which i realised wasn't on the previous jams ether. 

These images below show the changes that i had to make 

 Spelling mistake 

Reversing the text so it wasn't upside down 

Putting the title of the recipe 

adding the smaller circles to the lids 

After making these embeds the sleeves were then ready to put onto the bottles 

Below are the final jams with the emends i made above. 

I think overall they look really good, the layout is strong and the illustrations work really well, these illustrations are unlike jams that are already out there and so when on the shelf with other jams and commodities they will stand out. Also the tear off sleeve works really well adding anther dimension to the bottles, with some interactivity.